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This is a fan imagining it. Fan-fiction. Not really their backstory. Or is it? (NO. Ah, I am disappoints.)


Helena and Persephone Fanfiction Origin

The two sisters, with Helena being the younger sister (the more emo and goth looking of the two). Are wearing brightly colored in the ‘Hot Topic’ range clothing. Made me imagine their backstory after I saw their image and encountered them in the game (which is fantastic BTW).


They both are girls of the early 1990s working in mall at a ‘Hot Topic’ like store. They love their job. 

Their favorite band is ‘Direwolves of Midwinter’! ‘Winter is Cumming!’ Band members names after storms, Winter (Lead Singer), Fall, Summer and Spring. Why this important? Because it sounds cools. Also the sisters want to fuck the entire band. 

DoW rocks! (Band is even more fictional than this fanfic.)


There is a new hire at their store, a teenage boy named “ Darktide” (real name is Joshua), who is into goth and dun dun dun.. a newly risen vampire (he works the night shifts there, his coven wants the store discount). 

Helena of course loves this boy (or doesn’t , who cares, everything's dark, like whatever...), however the boy finds something fascinating about Persephone being so much more bold and brightly colored in comparison (Persephone used to wear pastels more often, especially leg warmers!) and wants to turn her. His first victim (in more than one way, he is virgin vampire, ha ha ha ha. The funnier thing is he doesn’t know about the sisters’ true secret! FUTA).

Darktide wants to start his own coven (his current coven thinks he is dumb, only pure luck he was turned in first place. The coven wanted a pet to play with. He is obvs the pet.

Anyways Darktide keeps attemping to get alone time with Persephone, but she is not interested and recommends hanging out with her younger sister, ‘ like you almost dress the same! Maybe she will let you borrow some of her outfits, ha ha ha'. (Darktide is youngish looking effeminate boy) 

She keeps making fun of his vampire name, ‘ Dark tide? Who the names themself after a girl's period? Ha ha ha.’ I know another ‘dark tide’, but sometimes his cousin ‘Light tide’ visits instead!

 Joshua thought it was cool, ‘DARK TIDE’ is coming! The end of the world is here!

(Persephone to Helena): 'Why you like him Hel’, he is more like ‘Dork Tide’, as Persephone rolls her eyes'.

Helena gets jealous as when Darktide is forced to spend time with her in the store, he can’t stop talking about Persephone, wanting to know Peresphones interests and likes. No interest in Helena at the time.

One night towards closing time finally Darktide gets Persephone in a vulnerable position and attacks her, actually biting her. Helena sees this and grabs nearest thing she can find (a Budweiser pool cue) and kills him ( a less than mediocre vampire killed by less than mediocre beer brand), with Persephone slowly turning into vampire on floor.

Helena loves her sister so much, as the jealously dissipates, she cuts her wrist and impales Darktide's fangs into her wrist, also turning herself into vampire. She then falls to floor hugging her sister, as they both slowly turn in the dark night, like a slow rolling dark tide! 

Obviously vampires don’t turn to dust in that dimension, just remain staked and eventually decompose. over long time.


While Persephone and Helena have different clothing/style taste, they are both sisters, and Helena always looks out for Persephone growing up. While they have spent hundreds of years together and now in ‘another'  different dimension (thats another story), they never let any man get between them (they always share, just like the game). 

Besides being vampires, they still have love of band ‘Direwolves of Midwinter’. The lead singer is so dreamy!

While yes those creature are from Dungeons & Dragons. Yes you are right. I was just trying to be helpful.

I enjoy the game and save it. However the save file only identifies what the name, class and level of the character is. I would suggest allowing to save the game so that we can name it something, like personalize it. Or at the least put a date time stamp on the save, so we know what most recent save is.

Rather than start a new message, I thought I would add on to this pre-existing message.


I have reviewed your creature encounter catalog and think there are few creatures you might consider for new encounters.


1-Giant Boar. Sounds simple and plain and pedantric, but this could be common type encounter. You could certainly gain food from defeating this creature (Yeah Bacon!), but this best part of this creature is his long and lovely screw type penis! Just imagining that long screw penis twisting and thrusting the fur rough against your skin as he ruts against you (and making that oinking sound), then comes complete with mass spewing of seed! Like a firehose unleashed! Maybe not the most visually interesting encounter, but am still bummed we never see the wolves either.


2-Gnoll/Beastman. You have Goblins, Orc and Ogre, but how about some love for the gnolls? Seven feet tall humanoids with crossbreed of hyena and demon ancestry makes another common type encounter and something visual different. The amazing thing is the real female Spotted Hyena actually has a fake penis (giant clitoris) and their cubs are born through it! How wow is the real world? Kind of sounds like your kind of creature, am I right? You can't even tell the difference of male and female in gnolls unless they are pregnant. Hyenas are matriachry as well. Sometimes they are slavers, so you could have whip as weapon (which has not been used so far. Whips are always sexy.). Also they excel at mimicry and could be great lure into an encounter! I am better than National Geographic! Certainly more sexy! If you do add gnolls (which would be amazing!) you might add on a second type of gnoll, a gnoll warlock or gnoll shaman. As you have plenty of physical fighters, I don't think any can cast magic (aside from the witch) so adding this could help resolve that oversight.

If you against gnolls in particular you could add beastmen, a variation on the theme (maybe a little more generic), but something still visually different from your current inventory. I don't mind Goblins but.. (well I do like what they do to my characters butt!) since you only have 1 orc and their are no hobgoblins, you kind of need another stock character encounter. Something more intimidating than goblins, especially as you level up.


3-Frogmen/Slaad. Your only water based creature so far is the mermaid, so how about some frogmen or Slaad? Just the idea of being filled up with frog eggs. Or those giant tongues, huge mouths and slimy bodies! Again another visually different creature for your consideration (can come in variety of colors and designs, like real exotic frogs!). Apparently slaad are infamous for actually impregnating random characters with their seed. The blue slaad infect their victims with a disease called 'Chaos Phage' which always turns the victim female (weirdly enough also turns the victim into a red slaad)! Certainly sounds like something that fits for this game!



I have more suggestions, but these were the three strongest. You already have fine start with the current encounters, but felt these three might add some more variety and are visually different.

Please keep up the great work! I always enjoyed your art and stories, only regret I didn't download this game earlier. You are off to amazing start!


If there is area or place for creature encounters, where is it located? Or do we simply continue to suggest here?